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Old 07-02-2007, 09:11 PM
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Default Re: Please review http://www.SpineCarePro.com

+ Soothing color scheme.
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OK design.
+ Easy navigation.

- Title tag is too long and all wrong. You Have: Welcome to www.SpineCarePro.com, Stuart A. Firsten, DC Doctor of Chiropractic, Novi, Michigan, Helping You Feel Your Best, Oakland County. This means that Google will display: Welcome to www.SpineCarePro.com, Stuart A. Firsten, DC Doctor of .... "Welcome to " is a waste because it tells me nothing. "www.SpineCarePro.com" is a waste because it is displayed 2 lines below the title. "A." is a waste because your middle initial is not important and there is only one "Stuart Firsten" on all of Google. (There are a lot more Dave Barnes for sure.) "DC" is a waste because you tell me what it is in the next 3 words.
So, try this title and see how it looks at Google: Relief. Chiropractic. Naturally. Dr. Stuart Firsten Novi Michigan. Benefit + important info.

- Description tag is too short. Google will display another 7 words. Don't repeat your title in your description. Make the description provide ADDITIONAL info to the reader.

- Get rid the day/date in the upper left corner. I know what day it is and I am not visiting your website because I don't own a calendar.

- Ditch the " Welcome to the online home of ". Duh, I know it is not your physical location. You have the same problem with: " Welcome to www.SpineCarePro.com
Please explore our website." And, this: "Please explore our website". Get to the benefit right away. Tell my why you are the best and how you can help me.

- Look at you website on a large 24-inch monitor with the browser window set to maximum. You won't like what you see. The human eyeball does not track wide lines of text easily.

- This: img src="picts/spacer.gif"alt="Stuart A. Firsten, DC, Chiropractor, Chiropractic, Doctor of Chiropractic, Novi, West Bloomfield, Farmington Hills, Farmington, Commerce Township, Walled Lake, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan, Oakland County, Back pain, Low back pain, Neck pain, Headache, Headaches, Pain, Disc decompression, Adjustment, Spinal adjustment, Spine Care" is keyword stuffing. The appropriate alt tag value for spacer is "". Yes, empty.
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