Re: Review for Body Jewelry Site
Too red!! What is with the caps in the left hand navigation bar.
The glass dildo has got to be off of the front page. (yes, I'm an old fart but it still is too much in your face)
My opinion, the boobs need a face. The pictures need to be toned down, unsharpened, lower light. The picture on the home page with the white shirt is much more attractive than the bare breast shots. A smaller breast with a sheer blouse will be much better. The pasties pictures are actually the ones that are going to get looked at.
The nav bar needs to be shorter Either sub-menus or going to another page. I would eliminate it from the home page using a subtle picture, of the item, and a clickable link would probably be better. The ssl certificate the Janes seal paypal all at the bottom. The home page has way to much text and a pornish look; sorry can't think of a better term. I have to agree with Chris there is a good look for this type of site, and you aren't there yet.
IMO unless you are appealing to some very strange people the site needs to be toned way down. It just need some class.
I would have a woman look at it. I don't think you have the right perspective. Think Nieman - Marcus.
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Last edited by netman4ttm : 06-21-2007 at 10:21 AM.
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