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Old 04-17-2007, 06:09 PM
handcrafteduk handcrafteduk is offline
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Hi,

I thought i'd have a go at posting a reply for you. I really like the design of the site (especially the colour scheme).

The 'about us' page could do with more spacing between the paragraphs.

I would change 'softwares' to 'software'

Also, on the homepage, I think there needs to be more of a build up before you present the products. It's not an industry i'm familiar with but I think it could be written more interestingly. You mention the features of the products quite often but not really the benefits.

This might help: http://www.thepersontosee.com/tpts/2...es_tell_b.html

Gary :-)
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