I agree with too much white space. I also like the 45 degree angle idea.
Try making the type large, bold and red. I picture it in a script type. Angle the type so that it overlaps the arch. Bevel the type and give it a drop shadow to make it look like it's floating. Red would be good or even a gradient of red to gold.
Maybe lighten the color level or intensity of the archway too so that it's pushed more to the backgound.
I would like the archway to have some real depth too. It looks like planes floating, it'd be really cool if it looked like it went back in space. You could still have the drop shadow, but it would look more like blocks floating than planes floating.
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