Interesting, I'll give it that. The hand thing is kinda cool.
My only criticism is that the buttons look kind of big, bulky and...well, Flash-like. It's hard to explain, but if it were me, I'd draw the buttons and their over/hit effects in Photoshop and then import them. It just looks cleaner.
Also, you may want to blot out the address portion of the illustration. I figured out what the URL was from squinting at it a bit (and then I realized it went down the right).
At least I say that if it's an under construction work.
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