Not to speak for the creator here, but I see an (older) TV set "blinking out" when you hit the power, or (gasp) actually have one old enough to need to turn a knob. Which, if I think positive, sort of subconsciously implies a job well done, it's a wrap, turn off the TV.
I also very much like the simple, bright gold "comet trail" up top. My only negative feedback would be I might bring down the "starbust" effect slightly to make it look a bit more like a fading TV tube, and keep it out of the text (no touching).
As for the text, the gray and the font choice seem "okay" but maybe flavoring with a deep shade of the same gold and going with a no-shadow, crisp antialias, and maybe a slightly different font (this one says "conservative and established" to me, which perhaps doesn't quite mesh with the graphics or company name) could be useful.
My two cents, it's a nice start - take care.
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