The length of the Meta Description usually should not be more than 200-250 CHARACTERS in length. If the S/Es truncate it, it may not make much sense.

You then need to be sure that the keyword density in your main content text is about 2-3 times, so if you have the phrase "outdoor attractions" in your description you then need to repeat that 2-3 times in your main text, so compose the text of your Description very carefully.

The JavaScript definitely needs to be in an external document and linked. How about all of the ASP.net (i suspect that's what it is) code, can that be linked to from an external file?

I think the site is good and has the potential to creat a good income for you.

I'm in Australia, so I wouldn't use it unless traveling to the USA, but when completed I think that it will be a very useful tool for the traveler.

Cheers