Hi
Too many keywords is an understatement! I've never seen so many on a website. You are only really supposed to use about 5-10 max. By listing as many as you have, will ultimately loose you hits, and not gain them.
Also, have you thought about putting the navigation at the top of your site, instead of to the left hand side? That way, when you scroll down the homepage page, you would'nt have so much wasted space, as you can pad out the homepage more.
I'm not too keen on the numerous fonts you have either on the homepage. My eyes were all over the place trying to focus. I would advise using two maximum, and that goes for size and different font.
Overall, not a bad try at your first site.
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