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Originally Posted by DIRTYDISCO
I dont ask for reviews to be overwhelmed with praise im looking for constructive critisism
23G is primarily aimed at people that Have not had a website before ,and looking at it i havent explained that well enough nor have I explained that the site is managed to a degree and hosted by me
as for the colours maybe they are too bold maybe they are not its all subjective and thats the whole point of a review
im dealing with all these at the moment and I never know what to work on first
http://www.mywizweb.com
http://www.dirtydisco.net
http://www.top100dj.net
http://www.restricted-18.com (adult)
http://www.23g.net
http://www.jaimeethomas.com will be flash based once learn how to use it
Im just a novice and im still learning
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Here, to say something constructive...:)
At the page 23g.net only the logo is cool. Try not using default colours, but play a bit with tones of colours (hope i said this OK?). I can see that you are a novice, and my advice is to look at the other sites and open them in dreamweaver to see how they have been done. You need to work on menus and you need to have control over the text that is on your site.
Your other sites are all almost identical, and they look very spammy, so I would suggest you put some serious work in them.
Hell, i need to say this - this is why i got so nervous, youre a begginer, and you have professional prices. Thats not gonna work. No offense.