Hi again Grith,
I was serious about your product. The artwork is quite attractive, and I'm waiting for the weekend to test my grand daughter's reaction to it.
While exploring the site and information further, I realized that I would normally visit a domain and website like yours with my granddaughter. The synopsis for Jack the Dullard and The Tenderbox, as written, would not hold her attention. I'd like to read a synopsis to her that will make her want to know the rest of the story. The Swineherd synopsis reads better for a child's product.
I'm not a web designer, and don't like to make suggestions to others about their's. So take this with a grain of salt. I would like to see the MP3 Sample buttons above the fold on the homepage, and included on the synop pages. Just my preference.
The audio clips sound great. Both the sound quality and voice talent are very good. I can see and hear your investment.
Lauching a new product is difficult, but you know that already. Keep pounding the ground, and getting the word out about your product. That's the best I can offer.
Peace,
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